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 * Writing **

Please insert one sample of student writing from your class. If this is in digital format you can simply copy and paste it across by clicking "Edit" selecting the place and pasting and saving. If it is in the students writing book, scan it to a file or use a digital camera to take a photo. Click on the File icon above, click upload files, select the file and upload. Click on the image and use the + or - button to adjust the size so that it is readable but not scaled off the page.

Do not include student names and you do not need to identify your details either. Please just put the time since entering school and the context for writing - e.g. personal recount, poetic writing.

Year 6 Narrative

My heart was hamering inside me, I didn’t dare look up. I heard heavy breathing above me. I knew I had to, so I did. I ran and ran and ran I could feel the vibrating in the ground it seemed to be getting closer and closer.

Something landed on my head from above. It was thick and sticky. I knew what it was saliva. Saliva from an animal. I looked up to see what it was. Big mistake I saw a big black hairy monster with driping fangs. I frose with shock the monster snaped at me, it alarmed me so much I remembered to run.

I hid in a burrow. The monster couldn’t get me now but something had just slicked past me it could have been a stoat, I thought. I had to run out of the burrow, I knew the monster was out to get me. But I decided to run. So I did. I ran back to my burrow all safe and cosy once again. Then I saw the monster walking away. Whew I said. JJJ !!!